Don't Panic Crit Feedback

What concept/statement/fact/question/tone is being communicated?

Femininity, dramatic, make-up

Fashion, beauty theme

Femininity with the construction of fashion

Fashion, pattern

Fashion, make-up

Is this being communicated effectively?

Yes, clear bold imagery

Yes a photo of a girl and fabric in background/type

Maybe could be made more clearly with more type?

No particular message to it, just represents fashion with people and fabric

Looks feminine, communicates effectively

Has the posters answered the brief?

Yes

Yes, fits words well & Vogue

Yes, they do represent Vogue, with the use of the female face and the dress patterns

Yes, it is quite clear about fashion and constructing fashion

Yes, abstract is communicated well

Who is the audience - have they been addressed?

Young females and I think they would respond to these posters

Students

Directed at females

Very feminine, so mainly women

Students who like fashion

Strengths:

Hand drawn imagery works really well combined with softer color choice

Layout, colour, style of drawings

The illustrations are effective as they are elegant and feminine

I like the middle poster with the hand rendered face. Almost looks like the face is being constructed to what you need to look like

Well drawn, good photos, nice layout

What could be developed further?

Typography - possibly get rid of the word Vogue. Have words that suggest Vogue.

Perhaps experiment with different type, middle posters colour is good, play with layout slightly.

Different compositions

Make text more clear, and maybe add some more typography

Development of face, different patterns/fabric perhaps?

Further Feedback...

Middle poster is cool I like the style

My preferred poster is the middle one, I like the elegance of the poster, and the layering of the imagery.

Explore drawing, manipulation of the face works well




Evaluation of Feedback:
I have chosen to submit the middle, subtle coloured image, for the competition as it was the one my group thought was the best. However I need to tweek it a little bit and maybe add some type to it as well.